Tom, where is your preliminary production work on the school magazine. If you don't get that uploaded over the weekend, I'll have to deduct you 15 marks, which would be annoying for both of us as i know you have done it. Miss Beange. PS When you upload your excellent evaluation powerpoint, you out to think about writing more analytical comment to go alongside your drafts and final copy of all 4 of your production pages. Well worth the extra marks it would bring. there's a biscuit in it for you!!!!
Well done again for your evaluation presentation last Thursday Tom. I thought you communicated your points in an excellent manner, using a good range of media terminology and attractive and informative slides. Your understanding of the forms and conventions of magazines and how you used and challenged them in your production particularly impressed me. I also thought you fully evaluated your product making thoughtful points about both its strengths and weaknesses. Your presentation was well informed by the audience research and feedback you collected. In fact I thought you had a very clear ideas of who your audience was. All in all I think your slides and presentation looked very professional.
Tom, where is your preliminary production work on the school magazine. If you don't get that uploaded over the weekend, I'll have to deduct you 15 marks, which would be annoying for both of us as i know you have done it.
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PS When you upload your excellent evaluation powerpoint, you out to think about writing more analytical comment to go alongside your drafts and final copy of all 4 of your production pages. Well worth the extra marks it would bring. there's a biscuit in it for you!!!!
Reminder to upload that material Tom. I'm hanging fire from giving you your final mark, but I can't wait much longer!
ReplyDeleteWell done again for your evaluation presentation last Thursday Tom. I thought you communicated your points in an excellent manner, using a good range of media terminology and attractive and informative slides. Your understanding of the forms and conventions of magazines and how you used and challenged them in your production particularly impressed me. I also thought you fully evaluated your product making thoughtful points about both its strengths and weaknesses. Your presentation was well informed by the audience research and feedback you collected. In fact I thought you had a very clear ideas of who your audience was. All in all I think your slides and presentation looked very professional.
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